Law of the Riverside Update
September 13th, 2012Hello again! This is late night Diane, brought to you by the untold joys and horrors of the internet, and also random statements.
We’ve been hard at work reviewing our story and the constructive criticism that our readers bring us. In light of some concerns about Ald’s flashbacks not being clear enough, Naty and Eric have redone Chapter 3’s vignette, Law of the Riverside, for tonight’s update. Please take a look and let us know what you think!
As adamant as I was about not calling out the flashbacks, I’m digging the sepia. And either some dialogue’s been touched up, or I didn’t fully appreciate it before.
My dead tree versions arrived yesterday, I’ll have to see if I can compare properly.
I added text box the first time we have a flashback in each part. That should signal that the borderless panels in sepia are flashbacks. Naty does great work and I’m very pleased with the sepia.
The dead tree version of Chapter 3 is printed with the blue-tinted flashbacks and I can’t reprint it. So you’ll get to enjoy the original version.